こんばんわ　みなさん。
はじめまして　ぼく　は　クリス　です。ぼく　の　にほんご　は　ちょう　まずい、たぶん、にほんほ　の　べんきょう　は　ちょっと　むずかし, だから　ぼく　は　がんばります！　　だって　あにめ　が　だいだいだい　だい好き、　十ごねん　は　みってました。

ああ　わすれてた、どうなに　せんぱいたち　が　いる　か？　えとう　たのうみ　が　ある、　ええ、　ぼく　の　じゅこうしょうかい　は　どう？

よろしくおねがいします！

Good evening all! Nice to meat you, name’s Chris. My Japanese is really bad, I think, Japanese studies are hard, so I will work hard! Because I really, really, really, really like anime, I’ve watched it for 15 years.

Oh, almost forgot, how many “seniors” are here? Uhm, I’ve a request, how was my introduction?

I look forward to working with you!

Now that that part is out of the way, I really could use some pointers on what I need to fix with my introduction, I tried to place a variety of grammar “rules” in it but I’m sure I neglected to add some I “think” I have some understanding of. Obviously I have a long Kanji road ahead of me, and as such, vocabulary with it. As stated, I’ve been watching anime for 15 years, what bit I have learned of Japanese has been from that, literally, aside from hiragana, which I was able to learn on textfugu in a satisfyingly short amount of time, something like 2 maybe 3 weeks, and I work 2 full time jobs. I am literally on the “I” page in the lessons, as I never knew, or bothered to look for the difference in ぼく　and おれ so when that explanation was read, I hopped over here to introduce myself, I figured using that was better than わが は　クリス　じゃ. :P

I am learning Japanese finally after deciding I want to teach ESL in Japan (as an excuse to visit Akiba), and eventually become a Japanese teacher here in the States.

Anyway, looking forward to it!