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Hey ^^
So I’m new here on the forum and wanted to know if my handwriting was okay or not, and where I have to improve
Please take a look :) (Sorry for bad quality)
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Shudouken.
From just looking at it fast, I can tell you that
your ほ is written wrong
your お should probably have a far larger circle, and the dot is placed wrong.
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This reply was modified 12 years, 2 months ago by
マーク・ウェーバー.
Oh thanks a ton :D
I didn’t realize I made them wrong :D
Specifically, the last stroke in the ほ should start at the top horizontal stroke.
I have terrible handwriting, so I probably shouldn’t judge others’, but…
- さ, き, そ and ふ all look a bit different in handwritten style – it’s a bit hard to describe, but in each case, one of the strokes is done as two, with a break in between.
- The second stroke on the い should be a little smaller (otherwise it risks looking like a り).
- The dash on the か should be to the right of the character (otherwise you risk confusing it with a や)
- う, し and つ need to curve a bit less sharply
- The dash on the む should be a littlefurther to the top-right
- The first stroke on the ら is more of a dash than a bar.
- The る and ろ need to finish a bit further to the left. Also, be careful to make them different – it looks a little like you’ve started to draw a loop on the ろ and then changed your mind.
- れ and わ should loop up and out more.
Some of these might be kinda quibbles, but penmanship is seen as rather important in Japan.
Lol he was asking if it was okay, not if it was perfect xD
… Says the guy who immediately picked on the ほ =P
I only pointes out what confused me when reading, and you must admit that both ほ お were hard to read? Maybe it comes down to the fonts you are used to. :S
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the さ, き, そ and ふ part was what i wondered about the most, I tried learning to write from here, and everytime I clicked on one of these I thought something must be wrong on the site :D
I just started Hiragana a week ago so these tips are highly appreciated, I think I better learn it right from the start ;)
Apart from the problems pointed above, it all looks okay to me but maybe you might want to make the last stroke on あ just a little bit longer?
Btw your を and ん are beautiful.
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